His fingers dug into her hips, yanking them up roughly so he could see her delicious slick opening, blushing rosy red lips with her little bud nested in between, slick. Listening to her panting while she arched her body up towards him, greeting him eagerly as her legs tightened around his buttocks.
His thumb firmly pressed down on her sweet bud, feeling her warm juices as his thumb lazily circled around her pulsing clit. Her breathy moans sounding the room as he teased her tight hole with the hard head of his shaft, rocking his hips back and forward.
Seeing her ecstasy escalating as her body desperately rocks furiously against him, keeping a firm grip on her, making her go wild and wanton.
Thrusting his thick shaft deep into her heat, her pussy pulsing tightly around his cock as he sinks it into the hilt, losing his control he savagely drives in and out. The intense sensation building to a peak, he could feel himself drifting, floating and crashing to earth.
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Panserbjørne left a challenge on his site for Flash Fiction Friday. It reads:
Your challenge for today was to use the picture above and write a flash fiction of 134-184 words. Additionally, I provided a key phrase I wanted to see used somewhere in the submission:
"...drifting, floating, crashing to earth..."
12 comments:
This is the first one that had the partner crashing to earth rather than the subject of the picture. It's so simple and yet so intense, and you handled the omniscient narrator really well too. Glad I didn't miss this one; the first time I went around it wasn't up yet, but I made a date to return and enjoy, as I have.
And as a side comment, I love the look of the site. The background image, the colors... really nice and suits you to a T. I've been here before but it really struck me this time; maybe something about the FFF? I don't know, but it's great.
Yeah I really turned it around, I don't know I just had this idea of the male subject actually watching the girl...the view he would get...so from there I went.
Thank you for the side comment, I have been trying for ages to find something that would suit what I write...and its been hard...
I am glad I started writing FFF, turns out its fun to do :)
Thank you for returning :)
Love this piece really enjoyed it from the other perspective. Yum!
always,
Bilinda
I'll echo Lexi's comment, it was a nice twist to hear it from his perspective at the very end. How many of us dream of just that moment for most of the day? Thank you for bringing it to life.
Thank you, I am really glad I wrote it from the other perspective now :) It just came to me, maybe its cock envy I don't...but it worked :)
I agree with the others with regard to your taking the perspective of the unseen partner. Very original. Challenging too, I'm sure, especially considering the gender difference (I always find this very challenging, at least). Very well done!
Thank you :) I am glad I have done somethin different :)
Good to know you enjoyed
Good idea having the partner crashing. Very nicely written!!
Humm... The vision of a man loosing control and savagely driving in and out is so very hot!
Nice : )
Echoing everyone's comments above. Hot, indeed.
~CP
Very interesting twist. I liked it!
thank you :) I am glad you all liked it :)
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