White heat of arousal burned through her veins, her sharp-like claws raking at his skin like an animal.
Uncontrollable desires climbing over her every sensation, wanting more, needing more. Gliding her tongue rakishly over the salty beads from his lengthy thick shaft, he shuddered under her touch.
Something smelled delicious; she rose to the weeping luscious red liquid from his skin, fresh blood smells like copper, she wanted to lick it all and feel it burning her body like orgasms.
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Panserbjørne left a challenge on his site for Flash Fiction Friday. It reads:
Your challenge for this Friday, 7-16-10, is to use the artwork above to write a flash fiction of 60-80 words. Since everyone seems to be enjoying the required phrases, please use this phrase in your submission:
"...fresh blood smells like copper..."
8 comments:
Hot passage!
~CP
Oh my...
So hot and wild!
I love the she enjoys the blood without overstating it. And it's a wonderful description of the taste of an orgasm.
thank you :) yeah I wanted to show that she enjoyed blood without deliberately going out my way to describe it, this seems subtle enough :)
This leaves a nice taste in my mouth. ;) Lovely.
Thanks for joining us this week, Bella!
-- PB
oooohh very delicious
always,
Bilinda
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